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Park: Epilogue by =Snook-8:iconSnook-8:

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Epilogue

John walked out of the park. People were passing nearby him; he was out of the park, knowing that his nightmare has come to an end. But still he wasn’t feeling relieved. He walked to pass the road… but he never reached the other side.
John was fool enough not to notice the car that was just turning from the corner, the conflict was fatal. John was now lying in the middle of the road, inside a blood puddle.
The weird thing is that, right the moment that John got unconscious and dead, his vision changed. His perspective wasn’t from his own dead body, but now from another optical corner. He noticed that he was seeing from inside the park. He looked at his hands and body. He still had blood on him but now his body was different. It was translucent. Then he realized that right next to him was standing the little girl. The girl looked at him and spoke.
“That’s why I didn’t want you to leave, from the first moment you stepped into the park I sensed that something bad would happen to you after you get out, I’m sorry,” she said, melancholy . John looked at her, but said nothing. The girl continued. “At least I managed to capture and save your soul right before you walked away. I’m sorry; I know I failed to save your body, too, but I had to save your soul at least, sorry…” He still said nothing. “John? Are you all right?” the girl asked. John sighed and took a cigarette out of his trouser pocket, lit it, and took a long drag… and, finally, replied.
“This is how it is, eh? I was going to die anyway?”
“Yes, it seems that you couldn’t avoid your fate” the girl replied
“I see… and what if you had let my soul to die too?” John asked.
“… Then you wouldn’t have had a chance to live a bit longer. But now you can, even as a soul,” the girl replied
“… And now I’m trapped in here with you?”
“Yes… but don’t worry John. You’re going to get used to it. Come on, I have a whole park to show you, it has some amazing places you are gonna love,” the girl said, enthusiastic, and grabbed John’s hand. But, before John walked away with the girl, he let a tear slip down his cheek.


“Yeah, let’s go.” He said and they took a walk into the park. Forever.

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~digitalspiritx Jul 7, 2009, 2:00:28 PM
That was a awesome end to a great and sad story. Great job!

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=Snook-8 Jul 7, 2009, 2:07:30 PM
^^ thank you so much

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Mood: Love =iloveargento Jul 7, 2009, 2:25:57 PM
First off: thank you so much for sharing all of this! This was so cool to read, the images were beautiful and it was such a treat to look forward to the different pieces/chapters as you completed them. :hug:

I really had no idea how you would finish this story! Even though the image at the top suggested that John would stay with the little girl I was still shocked to find out how. I think the ending has a beautiful and tragic little twist to it and I love it. *^_^*

This image is one of my favourites. The contrast between the two characters is wonderful. You really cannot go wrong with white, black and red. <33333
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!Ravigna Jul 7, 2009, 7:14:45 PM
Wow...awesome ending, I wasn't expecting that! I thoroughly enjoyed this series, please do more!

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...SO STOP FRETTING ABOUT YOUR SKILLS AND GO PRACTICE!! XD
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=Snook-8 Jul 8, 2009, 12:35:21 AM
XDDD It was my pleasure to share my story with my friends here XD besides I wanted to hear some opinions if it was good or not, so since it went well I might continue writing stories ;)

I'm so happy to hear that you liked it
thank you

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~YummyChems Jul 8, 2009, 9:03:15 AM
Damn, I would have said anything about a second part or .. how much I enjoyed the first one or what a great idea the whole thing was now - But my head's empty, simply.. empty.

:iconiloveyouplz: EMPTY IN A GOOD WAY x)

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=Snook-8 Jul 8, 2009, 9:07:35 AM
I'M GLAD TO HEAR THAT IT'S EMPTY IN THAT GOOD WAY :iconiluplz:

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~YummyChems Jul 8, 2009, 9:09:21 AM
JA. YOUR STORY MADE IT EMPTY. FINALLY, SOMETHING/SOMEONE HAS MADE THESE VOICES SHUT UP.

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=TotenVeloren Jul 9, 2009, 9:30:10 AM
Wow.. what a twist. I love the ending.. it's sad but that's the best sort of story. I was hoping there'll be more. YOU HAS SO MANY AWESOME STORY IDEAS K?

I'm glad they're together like this *u* <3

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